AN - Rough Cut 2 Feedback 22/3/12

Today in class, we managed to obtain some feedback on our second rough cut. Although a new cut is in the works, this feedback was still useful. Here is what our colleagues said:

• Performers need to vocalise.
• Sepia is good.
• Generate a still image at the beginning.
• Cross faded
• More performance sequences needed.
• More dance moves need to be seen.
• Shaky shots in some places
• Cut down on the amount of narrative.
• More slow-motion needs to be used in certain places.
• Get a fixed shot of the rose.
• Edit the video so it fits in with the beat and pacing of the track.
• More variation in footage.
• Split screen technique needs to be used.
• Clumsy use of media language. e.g. shot of member's leg.
• Layer clips
• Cut to beat at points
• Aspect ratio needs changing.
• Change the band member's positioning around at points in the video.